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Actually that's not sonichu.
It's Asperchu… A parody… The comic is pretty good.
And it makes sense for him/her to mention it since 789chan has a CWC board.
Plus this comic is just hilariously incompetent… I think it's better to review comics that are so bad you can't ignore it than it is to review mediocre comics where you have to explain what's wrong with them.
Also,the problems with this comic go far beyond just the art… if it was just vary poorly drawn I wouldn't care. There is no point in reviewing every ugly stick figure comic. But the comic is also vary offensive and utterly insane which would make it hilarious review material.

I don't think there are comics that are too bad to be reviewed. I think that's actually the point.
We have alot of reviews here about so-so material,where the review basically reads:

Art: Mediocre anime rip of.
Story: it's boring.
Characters: cliche with no personality.
Author: I don't know anything about him.

Whereas what I think would make good review material should go more like:

Art: Drawn with crayons by a blind person.
Story: Nazi propaganda.
Characters: Rapist Mary-Sue.
Author: Insane douchbag and ex-con.

This thing is a fucking review gem.
Only problem is: It may be a troll.

Re: Jeniffer's Show, by oddguyoddguy, 17 May 2012 11:01

I don't think it needs a review. It's bad on the same levels as Sonichu eg: Everyone knows it's bad when they look, a critical dissection of why it's bad would be a waste of time to write. An article with a big bold link reading JUST LOOK AT IT is all this comic really needs.

Speaking of Sonichu… http://jenffersshow5.thecomicseries.com/comics/398

Look.At.This.Comic

http://jenffersshow5.thecomicseries.com/comics/1

I can't tell if it's serious or not.
All I know is that's it's made by a tranny that made 789chan.

I want to review it because it's so amazingly bad,but I am afraid it might be an intentionally bad webcomic (I.E: troll comic) and writing an insulting review about it would be giving this person what he wants.

Does anyone know anything about this? I need more info.

Jeniffer's Show, by oddguyoddguy, 17 May 2012 08:52

Grammar check completed. I also resized the images.

To be fair, I understand this, but most of our reviews are of subject matter that the Author should be aware is flawed and often times the Author is coddled such that they do not see the flaws.

These are (slightly) exaggerated overreaction reviews largely for the entertainment of the reader; despite this an Author should be able to see the flaws being pointed out in their own work and try to improve upon them. These reviews are less of a "this minor thing is wrong SO YOU SUCK FOREVER" and more of a "WHY ARE YOU SHOWING A WOLF RAPING A CHILD IN CHIBI FORM!!!?" The extreme reaction is due to the nature of the subject matter, which tends to be blatantly lazy, blatantly exploitative, or simply incoherent.

…I said this substantially after anyone who was involved cared, but still. We get away with a more caustic approach because we are prioritizing targets that have a reductive shell of indifference, rabid fans, ignorance, or some combination of those.

Well...yeah... by EvilkritterEvilkritter, 17 May 2012 06:19

lol I was going to post that song on the facebook page tomorrow.

Ahem…

U
U-U
U-U-U-U-U-MAD
U
U-U
U-U-U-U-U-MAD
U-MAD
U-U-U-U-U-MAD
U-U-U-U-U-MAD
U-U-U-U-U-MAD
MAD-MAD
MAAAA-MAD-MAD
MAAAA-MAD

Hehehe, I didn't knew you could compose a song with it!

It seems in my rush to strike the iron while it's hot I seem to have hit it while it was still virtually liquid.

He is back on ED making an ass of himself again.
I may have to revise the review a bit.

Gone now but will be back soon… Will probably come to this forum too knowing him.
Prepare for some fun you guys.
(:

to Vihma: Interesting that you saw that as rape. Looking over it again, I can see why it can be seen as such (the catgirl loses her tail = loss of innocence?). It adds yet another element of bad writing to this mess: the hot girl with a dark/abusive past. I can't begin to imagine what it must feel like for women to read, but I personally hate this kind of writing. The idea that in order for a female character to be "deep" and "interesting" she needs to have a history of physical and/or sexual abuse is down right offensive.

To oddguy: I wanted to say you did a good job pointing out this comic's flaws. Kudos to your friend who supplied the visual aid. While I know the artwork is bad, it's nice to have a clear visual aid into HOW bad. Unfortunately, I'm not very artistic myself.

Try typing with correct grammar when you're one bad joke away from burning your own house.

I am just flipping through this "masterpiece" of a prudish but also pretty perverted piece of trash. Beside the points you already brought up, there are some things I came across that are disturbing till disgusting.

-the grandma in the comic is pretty equally perverted to the grandpa. She has some bathing fetish going on. First forcefully bathing the main character. And then the busty nymphomanic girlfriend Kitty, who is pretty visible an adult or maybe a teen. I am tending to put her more into the Twenties. Because, when she is a teenager, I wouldn't want to be in here skin with already this gigantic balloons in front of her overly thin frame. Okay, further proof that the auther has next to nothing idea about women, female anatomy or anatomy in general. Oh, and to add the level of plain mindfuck, Kitty is bound.

-what increases the grade of total wrong in the forced bathing scene, is the fact that there is a hint, that Kitty might have been raped. There is a flashback scene, were the main character tells his pretty generic past. Including meeting Kitty. And the scene, were she went missing and was later found by the grandparents at the river. Her body covered with bruises. And she refused to talk about what happened. It is not revealed, that she was raped. But the indication is pretty strong. And the idea is really disgusting. a) Because Kitty overall is descriped as a nymphomanic who attempts to abuse the main character (you might have noticed, I already forgot his name). This can happen, that a victim of sexual violence turns into a perpetrator. But the way it is written and shown, makes it all just plain disgusting and insulting to actual victims of sexual violence. b) the overly creepy bathingscene now gets into really high levels of plain WTF is wrong with this guy. I think, only a guy who never got close to a woman in within 8 foot reach, can come up with such disgusting and insulting shit. Alone, when you see, how Kitty is exposed and you know, that she may have been raped, gets you a feeling, like you have two week old roadkill in you mouth that has been lying on the asphalt during the hottest summer of the century.

-What also irritates me that the maincharacter looks seriously minor compared to superbusty Kitty, who is supposed to be his fiance. As I already mentioned, Kitty looks veeery adult to me. While the main character (still no clue about his name) looks either like a twelve year old boy or like a breastless teenage girl. Seriously, I have never seen such extremly female hips on a male character. I am more used to the other way round: too small hips on a other way very female character aka huge tits.

Those are the things, that came to my mind while flipping through the pages. Yeah, I don't even read this thing. I only flip through the pages. And I am just on page eleven.

Well, it's German (my native tongue). But I can assure you, you don't miss a thing. It makes even in German no sense.

Review done!

http://badwebcomics.wikidot.com/ryugou

Forgot to make the title a capital letter…

Anyway,hope you like it+ help me fix it up.

When you bring up a comic here, you're supposed to provide a link to it.

There seems to be several comics, all drawn by Michael Kirouff (presumably, since his name appears on all of them). The first one, Devine Magicks, is supposed to be some kind of choose-your-own-adventure type of thing where at the bottom of every page, you're presented with a series of options to choose from to affect the outcome of the story. However, you don't get any choices until 17 pages in. The art is some scribbly, animu-inspired crap with terrible anatomy and proportions, and every page looks like it was drawn by a different person, even though they're not (as far as I know). I think the same page just refreshes every time you advance a page, so you can't link to individual pages, and there isn't a page finding feature of any kind. That means if you start reading it, you have to finish reading it all in one sitting because you won't be able to go back to where you left off.

The next one is Role Playin' Gamer, which is probably the most generic title I've ever heard aside from Adventure Quest. It's more scribbly animu crap, again featuring art by Michael Kirouff, but with some credit given to Gwyneth Kingsley. There's only eight strips and it hasn't been updated since 2011.

Then there's Pirate Dragon Kitty Dinosaur and Daily Guest Star Comic, which somehow manages to have even worse art than the last two comics. Every strip features the same art being repeated with different text (in the same vein as Dinosaur Comics), with different "celebrity guests" (which consist of images stolen from Google searches). There's only four of these. The first two say 2007 on them, but the last two say 2012.

Then there's Hott Mini, which was started in 2007 and hasn't been updated since 2008. There's only five strips, again, all featuring scribbly animu. This one's hosted on Drunk Duck.

There's Crazy Kawaii, with art that looks like a cross between anime and South Park. It consists of five pages, and it was started back in 2001 and hasn't been updated since then.

Finally, there's Temporal Trek. The first thing I noticed about this one (aside from the same animu scribbles) is that the website says "Untitled Document" at the top. I think it's supposed to be some kind of Star Trek parody. Even though the art looks the same, the author goes by the name "Hrist" on this one, and their profile says they're a woman, age 23. Despite this, the strips say "Gwyneth Landale & Michael Kouriff" at the bottom. Apparently, Hrist is Gwyneth Landale, and I'm guessing she's the same person as Gwyneth Kingsley, and she has gotten married since they did Role Playin' Gamer and that's why she has a different last name now, but I don't know. This comic was last updated on May 8, this year.

So apparently, this Michael Kouriff guy has been making comics since at least 2001, but seeing samples of his artwork from 2001, 2007, 2008, 2011, and 2012, it seems that he hasn't made any substantial improvement in eleven years. Michael Kouriff apparently goes by the user name Ghaleon. His profile says he's 30 years old.

Re: Gamer Dater <3 <3 <3 by DrShaymDrShaym, 15 May 2012 03:53

I checked and found that Gamer Dater is not a comic in itself, but it does have links to about six webcomics-which I agree deserve reviews here.

Re: Gamer Dater <3 <3 <3 by Long TomLong Tom, 15 May 2012 03:28

I am honestly surprised this isn't on the wiki yet, seeing how it has been plugged by the author Hristy on basically every popular gaming/web-comic forum recently. Fans of MSPA might recall those really weird ads for that dating site thing that made the porn ads look decent in comparison! Well uh, I seem to be an idiot, as I actually thought the comic might possibly be something okay for some reason, and I clicked the ad!

Dear god, I still regret this choice, there are so many things wrong with this comic that I can't possible bring them all up here, the blatant sex appeal of the concept is just the tip of the iceberg! The worst part of all of it is the fact that it is just a lazy dirtbag attempt for the author to get laid in their lifetime, which will never happen, as they are a self-warshipping goat-hole who suffers delusions of having a large fandom and laughs off all criticism with references, :Ds, and <3s!

Ugh, if it I talk about this anymore I'm going to throw my monitor out the window. If you for some reason want to see all the things wrong with it yourself, just search Gamer Dater in Google, it is in the first page of results. Just, ugh, Jesus.

(Sorry if I posted this in the wrong subforum, I saw a lot of threads like this in here but if it was supposed to be in the good or bad webcomic subforum I apologize in advance.)

Gamer Dater <3 <3 <3 by OneManQuartet OneManQuartet , 14 May 2012 23:59

I did my own conjectures around why is Hetalia spawning such an annoying fandom:

My first take is on the Shojo style it uses to depict every character. Technically speaking, it makes every character perfect to the eyes of its audience. Stereotypes are simply out of the equation, thus people can't feel like the characters relate to them. This help the characters to desistetize from their regional audience.

My second take is on the ambigous relationship the characters interact with. You can't tell wether Germany feels pitty for Italia's naivety, or if he has a boner for him.

The third take is on the general depiction of Germany and Italia. Germany if the big tough macho stud, meanwhile Italia is the sassy wimpy pansy fag.

All this summed up makes the series attractive to the Yaoi fandom, then, all what's left is for the mentally disabled to kick in.

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