Mary Sue
Just thought I'd share the first page of this, I've been really bad about working on this, but I figured you guys would be able to tell me what you think of this so far, the story is about a teenage girl trying to get into the comic industry by any means possible, she's already popular online, so what's keeping her from making it big with publishers? Well, for one thing, her comics stink, critics shudder at the thought of her making it big, and trolls love tormenting her. I've got 7 pages left for the pitch, and yes, her eyes are deliberately off center and wall-eyed (I thought it would be hilarious).
Thoughts, critiques, opinions?
