As I have said elsewhere re: your review FJN, I think it's OK to begin a review and start documenting issues before a comic really starts if you really know (or have a really, really good reason to think) that it's going to be bad. On the other hand, you don't have very much material for such a thing to really start thinking about getting it seriously together on the Bad Webcomics Wiki.
Currently your Original Life review is wayyyy too long for how little it's got to work with.
And as I told you before, one could watch Howard the Duck and think "Man this George Lucas sucks ass" and then watch thirty minutes into Star Wars and just say "sucks too" because "well the duck one sucked", dash off a review, and look like a complete and total retard when you watch it a little longer and realize the guy came up with something great.
Granted, with the tag-team craptastic duo of Better Days and New Worlds it's very likely that politics is going to rear its ugly head sooner than later and ruin OL. Then again, might not.
You should copypasta what you've got and put it into a Notepad file for when it's time to review this comic.
As my horrible truth to tell, I have to admit I actually think Original Life's storyline is pretty decent so far. It's more than a little cliche but it has a certain cuteness to it that overcomes Naylor's mediocre drawing and writing abilities.
One more thing.
lets a little girl quote General Patton and thus comparing the situation with WWII
Somehow I can see Lisa doing similar things in The Simpsons. It's character irony when done right. Let's see the son quoting Pablo Neruda and I'll laugh.