Now this is a peice of Mary-Sue self-insert masterbation fodder that could give Mike "Mookie" Terrcianno and Laurel K Hamilton a run for their money. I think it would be great if it was the next target. I'd warn you the amount of self-satisfied smirking, flat supporting characters, and how the author will sabotoge plots so his character never really has to suffer will drive you nuts. And I won't even get to the fans and their crappy excuses like "it's guy humor", "Rayne is not a mary sue", "there are girls who like it", or "Rayne is so cute and funny."
Least I Could Do